Wusstest du eigentlich, dass ich auch Lilie (aber mit "e" *g*) heiße? Hab den Namen von ner ganz lieben Freundin abbekommen
Ich hab nun auch deine Fic gelesen und muss sagen, dass sie mir im Großen und Ganzen schon gefällt. Die Idee an sich ist interessant und vielversprechend, nur fehlt es mir ein wenig an Dialogen *seufz* Ich weiß, ich kritisiere das immer und überall, aber beim Lesen brauch ich einfach Umgebungsbeschreibungen, Gedanken und Gefühle, Gesichtsausdrücke usw. Aber ich bin mir sicher, das kriegst du auch noch hin *zwinker*
Bussi, Nora
Do you have any idea what it felt like to see you with her? That you would, behind my back - Buffy Buffy, this wasn't about you! This was about saving someone's soul. That's what I do here and you're not a part of it. That was your idea, remember. We stay away from each other. - Angel I came because you were in danger. - Buffy I'm in danger every day. You came because of Faith. You were looking for vengeance. - Angel I got a right to it. - Buffy Not in my city. - Angel You know, I have someone in my life now. That I love. It's not what we had, it's very new. You know what makes it new? I trust him. I know him. - Buffy That's great. That's nice. You've moved on. I can't. You've found someone new. I'm not allowed to. Remember? I see you again it cuts me up inside and the person I share that with is me. You don't know me anymore so don't come down here with your great new life and expect me to do things your way. Go home. - Angel See? Faith wins again. - Buffy Go. - Angel
Re: Just One Chance
Zitat: Frozen Eyes Die Idee an sich ist interessant und vielversprechend, nur fehlt es mir ein wenig an Dialogen *seufz* Ich weiß, ich kritisiere das immer und überall, aber beim Lesen brauch ich einfach Umgebungsbeschreibungen, Gedanken und Gefühle, Gesichtsausdrücke usw. Du meinst, dir sind es zu viele Dialoge? Weil sonst macht das nämlich keinen Sinn, was du geschrieben hast Keine Angst, das kommt auch noch alles, das is ja absicht, dass erst mal bissl geredet wird etc. Ich wechsel das halt immer ab.
Angel: I can stay in town as long as you want me. Buffy: How's forever? Does forever work for you? Buffy & Angel forever!
Re: Just One Chance
Zitat: Buffy16 Du meinst, dir sind es zu viele Dialoge? Weil sonst macht das nämlich keinen Sinn, was du geschrieben hast Nein!! Genau das Gegenteil. Ich sagte ja, mir fehlen die Dialoge, das bedeutet ich hätt gern welche, aber es sind keine da
Bussi, deine Nora
Do you have any idea what it felt like to see you with her? That you would, behind my back - Buffy Buffy, this wasn't about you! This was about saving someone's soul. That's what I do here and you're not a part of it. That was your idea, remember. We stay away from each other. - Angel I came because you were in danger. - Buffy I'm in danger every day. You came because of Faith. You were looking for vengeance. - Angel I got a right to it. - Buffy Not in my city. - Angel You know, I have someone in my life now. That I love. It's not what we had, it's very new. You know what makes it new? I trust him. I know him. - Buffy That's great. That's nice. You've moved on. I can't. You've found someone new. I'm not allowed to. Remember? I see you again it cuts me up inside and the person I share that with is me. You don't know me anymore so don't come down here with your great new life and expect me to do things your way. Go home. - Angel See? Faith wins again. - Buffy Go. - Angel